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历年试题 2009-06-07CN task1 答题录音

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Describe a social or political event in your country that people celebrate. Please include specific details in your answers.
托福考试时间:2009-06-07,2013-11-24
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整理很不错!细节很充分!但存在如下问题:

有这样几个音发的不对:
1. brand new失爆没有空拍
2. every household will decorate their home with red elements (听成了bread elements)逻辑上可与补充:since it is an auspicious color
3. lantern发成了lattern
4. And on the day of (发成了day it)Spring Festival
5. prepare a big festival 发成了fasred。dinner together

其他的表达错误
the elders的说法并没有
play firecrackers有点玩火啦!建议改为set off
#1 发表于:2016-06-28 [回复]
Chinese spring festival is the biggest social event that we Chinese people celebrate. It's usually in the middle of February and it signifies a brand new start of Chinese lunar year. So on the eve of the spring festival, every household will decorate their home with red elements, like red lanterns and spring festival couplets. And on the day of spring festival, it's the time for the biggest family gathering of the year. All relatives will come and we will prepare a big festive dinner together, which includes a variety of delicious food. And it's also the happiest time for children of the year, because not only can they get lucky money from the elders , but also they got to play firecrackers at night.
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非常棒,语音语调很地道,整体非常流畅,内容也用从句串联起来,细节满满,能在45秒说成这样真的相当棒了!听了很多遍都没有找到问题,我觉得很完美了。可以和你学的是,用which引导从句,把两个简单句子串起来,这样节省时间能说更多内容。还有语速适中,用停顿和重音来强调重点,所以听的人能很清晰的抓到你的点。吐字清晰,应该是背后做了很多努力的结果。向你学习!
#3 发表于:2016-06-28 [回复]