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作者:Rosette0925 保存时间:2015-09-19 人气:160
Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students can get as many benefits from activities in clubs, unions and societies as they can get from their academic studies.
托福考试时间:2012-07-06,2013-10-27
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Admittedly, students could benefit a lot from after school activities such as clubs, unions and societies, however, it doesn't mean that these benefits would overweight the merits the academic studies bring.

1' Study is a life-long process. The technology, theory and skills are repeatedly updated and reformed. But social skills and social circle would be long lasting once obtained. It's never too late to take apart in those social activities.

2' In our whole life vague, Adolescence is the most marvelous stage where our intelligence and health keep in the culminate for take command of academic knowledge quicker than adults. In contrast, without establishing well-rounded value system, students will participate in the social activities with quite low efficiency. And there is not any necessity for them to waste the valuable study time in the networking.

3' A good education should be more and more focused on the competence of ability not the relationship construction. It will cultivate a trend that students curry the favor of the powerful ones while nobody concentrate on academic researches. Eg. Image that those scientists and politicians, say the Edison Thomas and Abraham Lincoln, become the timeservers, no one would do contribution to the technological inventions or the emancipation of the black slavery.
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