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作者:Hello karroy 保存时间:2016-05-04 人气:129
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students can get as many benefits from activities in clubs, unions and societies as they can get from their academic studies.
托福考试时间:2012-07-06,2013-10-27
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Several decades ago,people in the past were constrained by heavy household chores, since they must shoulder the responsibility of supporting the whole family, they rarely had time and money to attend college and receive higher education. In contrast, nowadays, asked what is the essential passport one must own in this contemporary society, the boilerplate answer is the college diploma. However, I deem that travel and job are of considerable importance in such a plural society so gap year is allowable. Initially, the benefits of broadening one's horizon derived from travel and work can never be underestimated. One's outlook will be enlarged if he get acquainted with people of totally different personalities and had appreciated breathtaking landscapes.When asking about which one could increase people's knowledge base,traveling and doing internships have been the first priority for youngster aged 16-20 for the consecutively 5 years according to a survey conducted by The Teens Organization in California. In contrast, attending to college only hits the second occupies 18% of all the surveyed people compared with 72% of tour and internship. Admittedly, not only people can gain happy memories through social practices, they can also equip with practical skills acquired in this meaningful and colorful process. In addition, apart from personal insight, the advantages of interpersonal communication can never be exaggerated. Both travel and job provide people with opportunities of interacting with strangers and familiar people such as boss, company, friends and relative. To be concrete, when I was doing my internship in a law firm, I was bombarded by a lot of client in the whole day. Some of them were not in good mood, they were too hasty to explain the cases they were confronting in detail. That was the first time I realized that legal theories did not work here anymore since they even could not help me to figure out the concrete content of a particular cases. Fortunately I did not get in to panic, instead, I gradually learnt how to comfort my clients' mood and gave suggestions to them rationally, from which I absorbed a lot about the techniques of dealing with others. Obviously, I would not have learnt the art of communicating,which is crucial for a layer in his career, without my experience during the internship. Undeniably, the knowledge gained in school is the foundation for one to be successful in future career, however, people must commit that only a small fraction of knowledge is applicable in real life circumstances such as words spelling. If a person just sticks to the knowledge stated in textbooks, he is only a fogy who plunges into platitude theories and arithmetic without flexibility. Only through renting a house by ourselves can we learn we need intermedia agency to sign contract;through arranging our agenda when traveling can we know how to make a through timetable;through asking our colleagues the process of handing various documents can we be proficient in our job. Practice speaks louder than words, by trying and failing can we thoroughly reshape ourselves. In conclusion, traveling and doing internship could Enrich one's mind and successfully hence people's ability of cooperation. If you questioned the power of tour and job, this essay will present you answer.
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