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历年试题 2012-09-21NA 独立写作

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作者:Farewell2013 保存时间:2016-06-03 人气:115
Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Your job has more effect on your happiness than your living environment does.
托福考试时间:2012-09-21,2011-12-09,2013-01-27,2014-04-27,2014-11-23,2016-09-24
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Agree
1. Job can be more influential in the aspect of happiness than factors like cleaner environment and better equipment(Steve Jobs and Steven Wozniak started Apply in a garage which is dirty and untidy, but they love what they do and make a difference out of it)
2. Fascination toward the job will overweigh respect and reverence from other people from the perspective of happiness(Even if your work is not taken seriously by others and you are a nonentity in other people's eyes, as long as you love what you're doing, others' opinions don't matter)
3. Admittedly, when the living condition is so poor that people can't make a living under it, like short of food or electricity, then they can't be happiness
4. When a person's job can't be appreciated by contemporaries even if it is great(Copernicus's creation of heliocentric theory and Bruno's fight for the validity of the theory), then there is no way he or she remains happy
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